“Negative Criticism”

You may criticize me,
I won't say a thing, Believe me,
It's gonna hurt me,
Because it's not me,
I am not perfect,
I am trying to correct,
Trust me I will improve,
Won't show evidences to prove,
I can't open the blind eyes,
Who always try to say false lies,
My soul is shattered,
My lips are sealed,
My heart is broken,
My strength has shaken,
I thought you will motivate me,
But shockingly you devastate me,
No I won't let down myself,
Because I only know my real self,
You can't hurt me anymore,
My confidence has grown more,
So, thank you my well-wisher,
You helped me became better.
Love,
Neha@thoughtfulgirl

4 responses to ““Negative Criticism””

  1. geetanjali lal Avatar
    geetanjali lal

    Wow keep it up sweetheart…🤗👏

    1. Thoughtful girl Avatar

      Thank you my dear ❤️😗

  2. Pranav Thakkar. Avatar
    Pranav Thakkar.

    Negative Criticism useful to grow up if taken it positively and it makes strong any person. And if it is creative criticism, it is also important.

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